Eve ([info]lilacfield) wrote,
@ 2008-01-15 17:33:00
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Current music:Desert Rose - abingdon boys school

Steady - Fullmetal Alchemist

Roy/Hawkeye. Set during his apprentice days, so there are very mild spoilers (if you can call it that) for that part of the story, and mostly Hawkeye-centric. Written for [info]52_flavours (theme 1: Kan, ya ma kan).
Fullmetal Alchemist © Arakawa Hiromu, et al.


On afternoons when his lessons ended early she made him coffee - never tea - always less sweet than he preferred it to be, and always warm. There had been no dainty porcelain cups for her; since the first day she brought him his coffee in a pewter mug, and both her smile and his thanks were always genuine. Now and then she sat with him, but only when invited, a conscientiousness that was as artlessly endearing as the rest of her.

"A teacher, perhaps?" she replied, not doubtfully but pensively, when he asked. "I'm not entirely sure yet what I'd like to be."

"But not an alchemist," he said, without a trace of accusation.

"I wouldn't know how to be a competent one." She was not sarcastic by nature, and always open with him. "And alchemy does spiral out of comprehension sometimes. I'd rather handle something more reliable."

He never asked for a second helping of coffee, and she never offered. There would always be the next afternoon.



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[info]the_sunri
2008-01-15 04:57 pm UTC (link)
Aw, this was a sweet and intimate. :3 It's difficult to say anything that smart... This was just perfect at this length, but if you wrote something longer, I'd still like to read it.

Thanks for sharing this. n_n

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[info]lilacfield
2008-01-15 10:20 pm UTC (link)
I like writing slice-of-life pieces like this, and I know stuff like that is rather hard to comment on, so thank you for commenting :) There's just so much to write about Roy's younger days with Riza.

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[info]lady_toky
2008-01-17 03:05 am UTC (link)
i like it, it's soo sweet.

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[info]lilacfield
2008-01-17 03:20 am UTC (link)
Thank you :)

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[info]sheepfairy
2008-01-19 07:48 am UTC (link)
Oh, I love this - it seems very comfortable, and true to their characters. And it's a nice insight into Riza.

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[info]lilacfield
2008-01-19 09:29 am UTC (link)
Thank you - I enjoy writing about their quieter days together :)

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