Eve ([info]lilacfield) wrote,
@ 2008-06-03 22:12:00
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Nine Years And Counting - Naruto

AU. Minato survives after sealing the Kyuubi, and it's now up to Kushina to manage the house and look after Naruto, who happily looks after himself.
Naruto © Kishimoto Masashi, et al.


Naruto never came home from the academy earlier than five in the afternoon, but his lateness was not the reason Kushina asked him each and every time where he had gone to. She hardly ever worried about him; they shared a tacit belief that, barring another Great War, he would have enough resources to keep himself safe on a day-to-day basis. Kushina asked because Naruto's replies tended to vary, and she enjoyed listening to an avid storyteller.

Today his fingers were full of scratches and a little swollen, but he also seemed more complacent than usual. "I practiced throwing the shuriken in the forest," he said as he unclasped his weapon belt. "Most of the other kids do the same after academy hours."

"Uh-huh. So were you with any of them just now?"

"I only saw that Uchiha kid, in another part of the forest. He was probably practicing with his brother. Hey, Mom? If I have a big brother who helps me train, do you think I can improve faster?"

Kushina narrowed her eyes. "You've got me."

"Yeah, okay." Naruto seemed to think a brother was a cooler training companion, but knew better than to say so in front of his mother. "When are you leaving for tonight's mission?"

"At midnight." Kushina arranged a bowl of beef soup and a glass of water side by side on a tray. "Just between us, I'm glad I haven't had as many missions this month. I know they bring the money in and keep my skills from getting rusty and all that, but it gets tiring sometimes."

"But you're pretty good at accomplishing missions, aren't you?"

"I suppose. Here, take this."

Naruto accepted the tray from her. "Want to see me carry it on my head?"

"Is that what you've been doing at the academy cafeteria?"

He looked abashed. "Once. It didn't work out too well. Sakura-chan said I really am an idiot."

"Well, you can learn the art of carrying a tray when you're not busy throwing shuriken. Now shoo."

The door to Minato's bedroom was ajar, and Naruto nudged it open with his foot. "Hey, Dad," he said, setting down the tray on the bedside table. "Mom is busy preparing for her next mission so she's only had time to make beef soup for tonight."

There was a stirring on the bed, then the blanketed shape settled into position.

Sitting down on a stool, Naruto picked up the soup bowl with the spoon in it. "I fell asleep during math today," he admitted. "Iruka-sensei said he yelled at me but that wasn't why I woke up." He ladled some of the soup into the spoon and blew at it. "It must've been because Shikamaru prodded me with his elbow. That elbow felt like it was made of stone."

Mouth twitching at the memory, he leaned closer to the bed and carefully held out the spoon. His movements were smooth, well-practiced; he sometimes wondered why he could never be as graceful during lessons.

"By the way, did you know?" He stirred the soup, causing the fragrant steam to curl upward. "The wheelchair just came back from the shop. I saw it in the living room. Since there's no school tomorrow, think they'll allow us to roam around the forest for two hours or four?"

The blanket shifted. "You're going to show off the results of your shuriken practice?" The voice was very low, slightly raspy, and openly amused.

"Oh, man. Am I really so easy to read?" Naruto sighed, then straightened up, determined. "Yes, I guess you can say that." He gave a shrug. "And, uh, if I haven't gotten any better, you'll just have to tell me how I can."



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[info]ah_anime18
2008-06-03 04:37 pm UTC (link)
Im not sure if its the way im reading it or its just the way your story flows but I LOVE this fanfic...naruto has such an innocence about him..and the fact that Kushina and Minato are still alive make me feel all fuzzy inside ^^

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[info]lilacfield
2008-06-03 10:31 pm UTC (link)
If his parents are still around, I suppose Naruto would be a little happier and more content than he'd be at the beginning of canon.
Thank you!

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[info]kazie_komikcat
2008-06-03 05:59 pm UTC (link)
I really, REALLY love this one-shot! I love fics where Minato and Kushina are still alive. And Naruto was just adorable. Great job!

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[info]lilacfield
2008-06-03 10:34 pm UTC (link)
Thank you - I wanted to write a fic where everything's not perfectly all right for the three of them, though they'll continue to be optimistic.

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[info]premium_shaday
2008-06-03 06:19 pm UTC (link)
Awwww.
Kushina's such a mom!! And I bet Naruto's stories are the best ever.

I know I shouldn't laugh, but it kills me that Minato is a CRIPPLE CRIPPLE CRIIIPLE! cripplecripple. That's what you get for taking on a Bijuu, Yondy!! :D I'm so glad he's alive. It sounds like he's quadripeligic (sp?), poor guy.

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[info]lilacfield
2008-06-03 10:36 pm UTC (link)
Well, it is the Kyuubi, so I don't think anyone will survive unscathed if things get really serious. ^^

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[info]helike
2008-06-03 07:45 pm UTC (link)
In some way it's cheerful and sad at the same moment :) I love it :)

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[info]lilacfield
2008-06-03 10:39 pm UTC (link)
Thank you :) I believe all three of them will make the best out of any situation.
(Too many things should be explained if Naruto are still with both parents, so I chose to just cover a few issues)

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[info]helike
2008-06-04 06:30 am UTC (link)
oh well... I immediately picked up the part about the Uchiha brothers *__* Did their life change as well?

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[info]lilacfield
2008-06-04 09:11 am UTC (link)
If there is no Conspiracy of Doom and Madara stays away, I guess Sasuke would grow up to be a much different sort of individual. Which will make it a very different story from canon.

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[info]loving_kin
2008-06-04 03:19 am UTC (link)
I came across this drabble on the chuunin community website. I love your portrayal of Naruto here, and the line about his storytelling reminded me of how I used to make up "interesting" stories about school and tell them to people. ^_^ I really like Kushina in this fic also, and the mentions of Sasuke and Itachi were awesome as well.
Is it ok for me to friend your journal? I'd love to read more of your fics.

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[info]lilacfield
2008-06-04 09:16 am UTC (link)
Thank you - I figured I have to include Naruto's teammates here in some way.
And feel free to friend me, if you don't mind spammage in the form of memes, links, drabbles, and other writing-related stuff on your fpage :)

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[info]loving_kin
2008-06-04 04:40 pm UTC (link)
Not at all! ^_^

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[info]issen4
2008-06-04 05:24 am UTC (link)
This is a really lovely slice of life, especially when Naruto is so different but still recognisable.

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[info]lilacfield
2008-06-04 09:13 am UTC (link)
Thank you :) He's that different, is he? ^^ I meant him to be as noisy as in the beginning of canon, but happier.

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